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Thursday, 15 March 2018

Ashburton

In writing I did a recount.  I used adjectives to make my writing exciting. First I did a plan, then I did my writing. After writing I did my editing, first I fixed my spelling and then I read my writing. I found hard spelling and I found easy planing.

4 comments:

  1. hi Ethan it's caleb
    i like your work i think it is a good recount
    Ethan

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  2. hi caleb i like your work i think it is a good recount Caleb

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  3. hi miss m hope you better when you work with me

    i love you

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  4. hi Taylor no play with you on Monday and wed and Tusday and thusday and Frday

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