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Wednesday, 29 March 2017

Making Snot

I have been learning to use adjectives to make my writing more interesting.

Mrs Jack made the snot and we all had a turn at 'playing' with it. We all talked about the different ways it looked, smelt, felt, and what it did. Then we brain stormed as a class and shared our ideas. My idea was it smelt like shampoo and I loved the smell! 

4 comments:

  1. Amazing work Ethan! I wasn't here when you made slime and you made it like I was there playing with the slime! Maybe next time you could take a picture of the slime in the bowl so I could see what it looked like even more!

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  2. Well done Ethan. Next time maybe you could tell us how it made you feel on the inside. I remember doing that with you, it was fun.

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  3. hi Ethan i'm mikael from yaldhurst.I think that the who am I thing is really cool. I tried to find is but I couldn't.

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