Autumn Poem
In writing we have been learning about adjectives.
First I did a brainstorm with my class. We used our 5 senses, sight, hearing, touch, taste and smell. Then I wrote a poem about Autumn and what I was looking forward to. I used pictures to describe some of the words.
I was watching the red, brown and yellow leaves full to the ground today and they reminded me of parachutes flying from the trees. Do you like throwing the leaves up in the air and watching them float to the ground?
ReplyDeletehi brayden here i like adverbs and ing words we are useing ispace and similes and meatafors for are writing
ReplyDeletekindregards brayden
Hi Ethan, Nici Here
ReplyDeleteI really like how you said you were watching the leaves fall. I was too. Maybe next time you could make the writing a little bit bigger. I was waiting for more leaves so i could throw them at my family.
Blog you later
Nici
Hi Nici, thank you for your kind comment. i will try and write more next time.
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