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Thursday, 30 August 2018

My Disgusting Dinner writing

In Iiteracy we have been writing about disgusting dinners . we had to make up a disgusting dinner story using losts of adjectives . I liked writing about Zane toenail pie . We published our stories on our chrmebooks in the end . I hope you like my Disgusting dinner . What Would you like in your Disgusting  dinner ? 

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  1. Anonymous30 August 2018 at 16:35

    Hi Ethan I like the interesting words in your story. I think you could change my name at the start of the toenail pie. you story makes me think about yucky food.

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  2. Anonymous2 September 2018 at 15:20

    Hi Ethan I like your disgusting dinner writing. Zane's toenail pie is like a pie with his toenail

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