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Sunday, 10 November 2019

Surfing Trip

On Friday the year 5\6's went Surfing at Sumner Beach. I saw my best friend Riansha surfing and fall over . 
I fed the birds bread.  I and Mrs C got ice cream and I played at thr playground. I played  on the slide. I and Zane played tag with Te Marino and I wet Mrs C at the water park. I and Mrs C made a big sand castles at the beach. I buried Mrs C's feet in the sand . 

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  1. Hey Ethan, This is great! It sounds like lots of fun! you used grammar well! Maybe next time you could get a photo of the sand castle I really wanna see it. Unless you broke it before you could. did you break it tho?

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