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Thursday, 24 May 2018

Summer Poem

In Whakarua literacy we have been learning to use describing worlds in our writing. We wrote a Summer Poem about what we remember about summer . We used adjectives to  make  our poem make interesting . Here my is my Summer Poem. I hope you like it. 😁

3 comments:

  1. That's really good Ethan. I really like how you like the summer time. maybye if you could add more WOW words into it.

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  3. Thank you Taylor for your positive and helpful comment. I will try to put more WOW words in my writing next time.

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